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It had been a long day of messing about and chasing each other around the park, so what you and Gilbert needed now was a cold drink and a comfortable sofa to sprawl on.

Gilbert had taken you back to the house he shared with his brother. You, being used to the house by now, hung your jacket up and kicked off your shoes.

"What do you want to drink?" Gil asked, leading you into the kitchen.

You followed him, shrugging. "Coke?"

Gilbert grabbed two glasses from the cupboard before tugging a full bottle out of the fridge, none too gently.

"Careful!" you scolded. "It'll fizz over."

With a scoff, Gilbert put his hand on the lid. "I didn't shake it up enough for that." He twisted the top to open the new bottle. As you predicted, the coke began to fizz, spraying Gilbert right in his arrogant face.

You couldn't help yourself. You doubled over with laughter, holding your stomach as Gilbert frantically tried to get the lid back on the bottle. "Well, I hate to say I told you so, but..." you trailed off, humming in thought. "No, wait. I love saying I told you so."

Gilbert glared over at you, wiping his face with the sleeve of his shirt. He huffed, unscrewing the bottle lid, successfully this time, and filling the two glasses.

You reached out to grab a glass, only to be stopped by the feeling of liquid being poured over your head.

"GILBERT!" You screeched, reaching up to grab the bottle off him. However, Gilbert was much taller than you, and held the bottle out of your reach.

"That was for laughing at me." he said in a matter-of-fact tone, a smirk on his face.

You growled, folding your arms.

Giving his signature chuckle, Gilbert wound an arm around your waist. "I think we might need a shower." he muttered. He scooped you up, carrying you to the bathroom.

All in all, it was a good day. Even if you did get covered in coke and scolded by Ludwig for the state of the kitchen.
Can you say, drabble?

So, guess how I got this idea orz
Yup, the great Lolly got covered in coke. I came out of the kitchen and said to my grandmother "LOOK WHAT YOUR COKE DID TO ME!" So, yeah I was not best pleased.
Also, I kind of trolled you with the title, huh?
You guys are all like "With a title like 'A Sticky Mess' this has to be a lemon!" Then I come along like "LOL nope~"
Anyway, I hope you guys like it!
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Kuraudia-Ve Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol that happened to me once!! it happened the exact same way too! I got the bottle out rather roughly and my mom was like "be careful it'll probably fizz" and I was like "PSHH OH COME ON NO IT WON'T" with the words 'arrogant & egotistical' written all over my face and I opened it and it shot up so fast and it was all over my face and me and my mom couldn't stop laughing x'D
LolitaLollyLips Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Isn't it awesome when you get put in your place by a drink?
Kuraudia-Ve Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ikr! My mom was all "see?! *cant stop laughing* now you know not to be so egotistical with Mr. Coke!!" x'D
BlueLight01 Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwww so cute!!!!
yeloweminems Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icontrollfaceplz: such a troll lol still very cute though :)
Too bad it's not a lemon coke lol!
I seriously might have graves the coke and started chugging it down ever since I moved back here to the USA I 've loved coke
LolitaLollyLips Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love coke too~
I just don't love wearing it xD
You: Psych!
Everyone reading this: Damn you, bastard. Damn you!

Can you feel the love from us?
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