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It had been a long day of messing about and chasing each other around the park, so what you and Gilbert needed now was a cold drink and a comfortable sofa to sprawl on.

Gilbert had taken you back to the house he shared with his brother. You, being used to the house by now, hung your jacket up and kicked off your shoes.

"What do you want to drink?" Gil asked, leading you into the kitchen.

You followed him, shrugging. "Coke?"

Gilbert grabbed two glasses from the cupboard before tugging a full bottle out of the fridge, none too gently.

"Careful!" you scolded. "It'll fizz over."

With a scoff, Gilbert put his hand on the lid. "I didn't shake it up enough for that." He twisted the top to open the new bottle. As you predicted, the coke began to fizz, spraying Gilbert right in his arrogant face.

You couldn't help yourself. You doubled over with laughter, holding your stomach as Gilbert frantically tried to get the lid back on the bottle. "Well, I hate to say I told you so, but..." you trailed off, humming in thought. "No, wait. I love saying I told you so."

Gilbert glared over at you, wiping his face with the sleeve of his shirt. He huffed, unscrewing the bottle lid, successfully this time, and filling the two glasses.

You reached out to grab a glass, only to be stopped by the feeling of liquid being poured over your head.

"GILBERT!" You screeched, reaching up to grab the bottle off him. However, Gilbert was much taller than you, and held the bottle out of your reach.

"That was for laughing at me." he said in a matter-of-fact tone, a smirk on his face.

You growled, folding your arms.

Giving his signature chuckle, Gilbert wound an arm around your waist. "I think we might need a shower." he muttered. He scooped you up, carrying you to the bathroom.

All in all, it was a good day. Even if you did get covered in coke and scolded by Ludwig for the state of the kitchen.
Can you say, drabble?

So, guess how I got this idea orz
Yup, the great Lolly got covered in coke. I came out of the kitchen and said to my grandmother "LOOK WHAT YOUR COKE DID TO ME!" So, yeah I was not best pleased.
Also, I kind of trolled you with the title, huh?
You guys are all like "With a title like 'A Sticky Mess' this has to be a lemon!" Then I come along like "LOL nope~"
Anyway, I hope you guys like it!
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Comedywiz411 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014   Writer
Lol I had the same problem with one of those Ice flavored sparkling water thingies. I was drinking it, and I saw the fizz, and I like sipping the fizz, so I got excited, closed it, shook it ONCE(but maybe a little hard) and re-opened it. It sprayed all over the table area and on the floor, and it got on my arms(and I was like "DAAAAAAMMMN")... But I didn't wanna waste that much, so I licked it offa me for no reason and then cleaned the rest ^3^ ... Good thing I was home alone!!! (Btw, this all happened in about 20-30 seconds T-T)
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LolitaLollyLips Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I sip the fizz, too uwu
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MidnaPlayer Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Another random thought from me: even though I don't like coke, think it would be fun to swim in a pool full of coke!
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LolitaLollyLips Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sticky, though :/
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MidnaPlayer Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah...but thats what showers are for!~
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LolitaLollyLips Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Fair point.
Problem is, I have about three huge bottles of coke and a paddling pool so now I have an urge...
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MidnaPlayer Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconspongebobrapefaceplz: dew it.
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:iconlolitalollylips:
LolitaLollyLips Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well, it's 1:30 am right now, so maybe in the morning orz
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:iconmidnaplayer:
MidnaPlayer Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lol alright X3 but u do that early in the morning so you can surprise your parents!
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:iconlolitalollylips:
LolitaLollyLips Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I no longer live with my parents, but it'll be a nice surprise for my partner, I guess.
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Kuraudia-Ve Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol that happened to me once!! it happened the exact same way too! I got the bottle out rather roughly and my mom was like "be careful it'll probably fizz" and I was like "PSHH OH COME ON NO IT WON'T" with the words 'arrogant & egotistical' written all over my face and I opened it and it shot up so fast and it was all over my face and me and my mom couldn't stop laughing x'D
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LolitaLollyLips Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Isn't it awesome when you get put in your place by a drink?
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Kuraudia-Ve Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ikr! My mom was all "see?! *cant stop laughing* now you know not to be so egotistical with Mr. Coke!!" x'D
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BlueLight01 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwww so cute!!!!
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yeloweminems Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icontrollfaceplz: such a troll lol still very cute though :)
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Avidbananas Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
Too bad it's not a lemon coke lol!
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Wafflepigs Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014
OH MEIN GOTT I SEE WHAT U DID THERE OMG ROTFL
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:iconkaia99:
kaia99 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
I seriously might have graves the coke and started chugging it down ever since I moved back here to the USA I 've loved coke
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LolitaLollyLips Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love coke too~
I just don't love wearing it xD
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YasminKirkland1031 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
You: Psych!
Everyone reading this: Damn you, bastard. Damn you!

Can you feel the love from us?
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LolitaLollyLips Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, I can't help it, everyone seems to love me ;)
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YasminKirkland1031 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
Yea
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MizuVargas Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Student Writer
This has happened to me... but unfortunately ze awesome that is Gilbert wasn't there.
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:iconlolitalollylips:
LolitaLollyLips Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know your feel, bro :(
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:iconmizuvargas:
MizuVargas Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Student Writer
I know why Prussia hide from us!
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:iconlolitalollylips:
LolitaLollyLips Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Why?
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:iconmizuvargas:
MizuVargas Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Student Writer
Well, there is the fact there are rabid fangirls (points to self), crazy scientists. It mostly rabid fangirls
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LolitaLollyLips Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, true...
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EpiKfurry Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*reads the ending of the description* ...... you evil genius XD
haha love it!
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LolitaLollyLips Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconmwahahaplz:
I'm glad~
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AliceLiddell123 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
How cute! Nicely done.
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LolitaLollyLips Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks~
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AliceLiddell123 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
You are most welcome~
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hetalialover17 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha I love
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LolitaLollyLips Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you~
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hetalialover17 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome.
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germanpuppydog Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
NO LEWMON
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LolitaLollyLips Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*laughs evilly*
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germanpuppydog Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I challenge you to write what happens next. *strokes chin*
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LolitaLollyLips Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconchallengedeniedplz:
I am no good at writing het lemons orz I can do yaoi and yuri, but not het.
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germanpuppydog Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Well ok.
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xxxWARGIRLxxx Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ok come on guys, who here thought something sexual at reading the title??? XDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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LolitaLollyLips Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love your icon!
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xxxWARGIRLxxx Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD Thank you~ I had a buddy o' mine make it for me~ It's totally kick ass! :iconujellyplz:
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LolitaLollyLips Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I'm singing Iievan Polka xD
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MurderScreamer Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Professional General Artist
X3 a sticky situation X3
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goodlucklight Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
....I think you should but mature content to troll them more :trollface:
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:iconlolitalollylips:
LolitaLollyLips Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ha, yeah, I should xD :icontrollfaceplz:
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